I have two versions of the same poem and I am unable to decide which word is better.
Please give me some feedback
Thanks
Blair :)
Please give me some feedback
Thanks
Blair :)
Variation 1
Silent Wall
expires tears
rivering downwards
Variation 2
Silent Wall
Silent Wall
expires tears
rivering downwards
Variation 2
Silent Wall
extrudes tears
rivering downwards
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